Durante
mi dia en Madrid, yo viste Prado Museum , Retrio Park, Plaza Mayor, y Rastreo Maquedor. Yo ando todo! Mi lugar
favorito fue Retrio Parque. El fin semana pasada, mi amigos y yo visitamos el
Retrio Parque. Me gusto porque es muy grande y bonita. Ademas visite, Plaza
Mayor. Muchos cafes y fiestas en Plaza Mayor. Me gusto Plaza Mayor mas que
Prado Museum porque Plaza Mayor es divertido. Plaza Mayor es muy diferente. No
me gusta visitar el Restaraunte Volvoreta. Comi el pollo y no me gusta. El
pollo es no bueno. Anoche, fue bailar en Plaza Mayor. Muy fantástico! Madrid es
muy bonita y interesante. Dos besos!
This entry demonstrates that you know how to use gustar in the preterite. Your developing mastery of the -ar preterite verbs and ser/ir is evident throughout the essay. Your tendency to mix present tense with preterite demonstrates that you're still getting used to using two tenses in Spanish. Good use of signal words. Your ability to make comparisons in Spanish using a variety of adjectives in displayed throughout the essay. Also, the focus of your essay strayed from sharing your opinion and became more of a retelling of what happened, which you often described in the present tense. Next time you need to remember your accent marks and consistently stay in the preterite.
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